tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-46729015677152809352024-03-13T09:59:50.190-07:00Escaping The ArroyoThe life-long burden of trying to make sense out of violenceAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04164188328139258468noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4672901567715280935.post-25196835273466474082012-12-03T08:05:00.000-08:002012-12-03T08:08:48.300-08:004 Reasons Why I Love/Hate Reviews<div style="text-align: left;">
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1. Can't live with
them/Can't live without them. 2. Readers demand that you have
them/Readers don't like to write them. 3. Five-star reviews are
wonderful/One-star reviews not so much. 4. They make me sad/They
make me happy.
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“Gripping”</div>
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“Couldn't put it down”
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“Compelling”
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“The most well-written
book I have ever read”</div>
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Writers love to read
reviews like that. I know I do. We've put our heart and blood into
our work and we want to hear that you “get” what we have created.
We want to hear you say you will lap up any and every word we have
ever written or ever will write.
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When I look at my Amazon
account and I see another review has been posted, my heart races with
excitement/trepidation. It could be good, but it might not be.</div>
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“Unfortunately, this book
is really, really poor”
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“The c<span style="font-weight: normal;">haracters
were uninspiring” </span>
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<span style="font-weight: normal;"> “I
would rather watch the grass grow” </span>
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“Well, this is one
authoress I will not be reading again.”
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or even “It was OK”</div>
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I don't like to hear any of
that. Well, I guess I don't hate the “OK” one but it's not as
warm and fuzzy as, “The most well-written book I have ever read”.
I really liked that one.</div>
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I know the commentators
think they are just being honest, but don't they understand that this
honesty thing can set off a whole chain of unpleasant events, like:</div>
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The writer gets a bad
review.</div>
The writer gets bummed out.
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The writer begins to fixate
only on the negative review, ignoring the other 129 positive reviews.
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The writer sinks into a
deep, dank, drinking depression.<br />
The writer considers
drastic measures, like:
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<li><div align="LEFT" style="margin-bottom: 0in;">
Suicide? <i>Too</i>
drastic.</div>
<li><div align="LEFT" style="margin-bottom: 0in;">
Never writing again?
Maybe.</div>
<li><div align="LEFT" style="margin-bottom: 0in;">
Writing back to the
reviewer? Yeah, that's the ticket. Let the reviewer know why you
left out big chunks of plot, or why you thought character
development was unnecessary, or most importantly, why you thought
a hundred page description of the man's chest added intrigue to
your young adult cook book novel.
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</li>
</li>
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Fortunately, the writer
decides <i>not</i> to <span style="font-style: normal;">actually</span>
write back to the reviewer but instead spends copious amounts of time
composing witty hypothetical responses in her head. That makes the
writer feel a tiny bit better.<br />
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But, the supreme comfort,
as all writers know, is to read the bad reviews of other, much more
famous, much more successful writers.
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Here are some actual
reviews.</div>
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<b>Pride and Prejudice</b> -
“A completely forgettable book, and I have no clue as to why so
many people find it romantic.”</div>
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<b>War and Peace - </b><span style="font-weight: normal;">
“2nd worst book ever”</span></div>
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<b>Anna Karenina</b><span style="font-weight: normal;">
- “Quite possibly the most boring thing I have ever read.”</span></div>
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<span style="font-weight: normal;">I
wonder if the great J K Rowling feels </span><span style="color: black;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman, serif;"><span style="font-size: small;"><span style="font-style: normal;"><span style="text-decoration: none;"><span style="font-weight: normal;">demoralized</span></span></span></span></span></span><span style="font-weight: normal;">
when her readers belittle her new novel, “The Casual Vacancy”</span><b>.
</b><span style="font-weight: normal;">This book</span><b> </b><span style="font-weight: normal;">has
more one-star reviews than five-star reviews and has generated
considerable disappointment from her loyal readers. I know c</span><span style="font-family: Times New Roman, serif;"><span style="font-size: small;"><span style="font-weight: normal;">omments
like “</span></span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman, serif;"><span style="font-size: small;"><span style="font-style: normal;"><span style="text-decoration: none;"><span style="font-weight: normal;">Dull,
Dismal and Disappointing” and “100 shades of 'meh'” would make
me sad, but on the other hand her book is currently #25 in books on
Amazon. And, since there are somewhere around five million books on
Amazon, being #25, is probably going to trump a heap of warm and
fuzzy reviews. So, I guess, in the end, it's not really how many
good or bad reviews you get; it's how many readers read your book. </span></span></span></span></span></span></div>
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Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04164188328139258468noreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4672901567715280935.post-33651735893729094162012-11-19T11:50:00.000-08:002012-11-19T11:50:44.639-08:00One Thousand Sold and Other New StuffYep, the book "Escaping the Arroyo", out almost five months now, has sold almost 1,000 copies on Amazon. I hope everyone is as impressed as I am. It has been said that 93% of all books sold sell less than 1,000 copies - EVER! Are you more impressed now? <br />
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Sure, some books sell a thousand a day. Those would be your best sellers, your "50 Shades of Gray", your "Twilights", stuff like that. Those are freaks. And yes, I do aspire to be a freak, but that will take some freakish happenstance, something that propels me into the stratosphere. What that might be, I haven't a clue. <br />
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But for now, I'm more than satisfied. That's not to say that I am done; I'm still aiming for a million. It just might take a little bit longer than five months. This time.<br />
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<strong>New Stuff</strong><br />
<strong></strong><br />
Coming out hopefully next month, will be a book of poems, co-written by Kathy Teller and myself, entitled "Sharp as Stars - Poems of Love and Loss". One of the poems in the book, "The Radiologist's Report" won Goodreads best poem award for October.<br />
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Also coming out (again hopefully) in February or March of 2013, a new true crime novel about the horrific Hollywood Video Murders that occurred in Albuquerque in 1996. <br />
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Lastly, maybe out in April 2013, I will have my mystery done. It is kind of along the lines of "The Godfather" but different. <br />
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Regarding the new books, I will be switching over to my other facebook page sometime in the future. It is <a href="http://www.facebook.com/joycenanceauther">www.facebook.com/joycenanceauther</a>. For now I will try to put info on both pages. <br />
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Feel free to go to the <a href="http://www.facebook.com/joycenanceauther">www.facebook.com/joycenanceauther</a> and click "LIKE" on that page so I can tell myself that the info I post there is being read by someone. <br />
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Have a great day.Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04164188328139258468noreply@blogger.com2tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4672901567715280935.post-43348741221621335642012-10-01T08:32:00.000-07:002012-10-01T08:35:28.012-07:00Amazon Book Giveaway is a Giant Success<span style="font-family: Times New Roman, serif;"><span style="font-size: small;">I
have no idea if what I say below is typical or phenomenonal. To me
it's the latter. I'm sure not bragging about how smart I am - just
how lucky. </span></span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Times New Roman, serif;"><span style="font-size: small;">As
always, I went into this giveaway business not really knowing what I
was doing. How could I? I hadn't done it before and I had no one
to advise me. I was just hoping it would be kind of a good idea. </span></span><br />
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<div style="margin-bottom: 0in;">
“<span style="font-family: Times New Roman, serif;"><span style="font-size: small;">It”
being to set up a one day ebook giveaway on Amazon of my book
“Escaping the Arroyo”. The reason I came up with the idea was
because my unit sales were going nowhere. As of the morning of
September 28<sup>th</sup>, when I commenced my giveaway, I had sold a
total of 18 units for September. I had been told by someone who was
a “real” published author (not self-published like myself) that
if you give away between 400 to 1000 in a day, you are doing well. </span></span>
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<span style="font-family: Times New Roman, serif;"><span style="font-size: small;">So
on Friday, the 28<sup>th</sup>, at about 9 AM (my giveaway had
started at 12:01AM PDT, some 8 hrs earlier – I'm in Albuquerque, NM
which is MDT) the number given away was 102. I was pleased. Pleased
that it was only 9 in the morning and 102 people had found my book
interesting enough to download. </span></span>
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<span style="font-family: Times New Roman, serif;"><span style="font-size: small;">At
12:30, I looked again and I saw the book was at 307. In my mind that
was great because it meant for sure I would at least make it to 400
(like a “real” published author). I then went out to run some
errands.</span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Times New Roman, serif;"><span style="font-size: small;">Arriving
back home at about 2:45, I soon checked again and that's when it
started to go crazy. I</span></span></div>
<span style="font-family: Times New Roman, serif;"><span style="font-size: small;">saw
that the number of downloads was up to 1,385. I couldn't believe my
eyes. I called my friend Margaret and told her of this strange turn
of events and she didn't understand why it had jumped either. I
looked at the numbers again while still talking to Margaret and BOOM,
ten minutes later, they had jumped another 50 units. </span></span><br />
<br />
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<span style="font-family: Times New Roman, serif;"><span style="font-size: small;">And
that was just the beginning; soon thereafter, the tally was going up
about 100 units every 5 minutes. I was deliriously happy but
mystified. It went from 3,000, to 5,000 and then by the time I went
to sleep at about 11, it had reached 7,500. Flabbergasted I was. In
the meantime, the book had also reached #1 on True Crime and #1 on
Inspirational and #5 overall on FREE Kindle. </span></span>
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<span style="font-family: Times New Roman, serif;"><span style="font-size: small;">The
final giveaway total for one day was 8,750!!! </span></span>
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<span style="font-family: Times New Roman, serif;"><span style="font-size: small;">Some
people might wonder what is so great about giving away a lot of my
product for free? I didn't feel bad about giving away my
books because I knew without the giveaway those people were never
going to download the book onto their Kindle – ever - and never
would have even considered reading it. (I know most of the free books
downloaded aren't read – sadly) </span></span>
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<span style="font-family: Times New Roman, serif;"><span style="font-size: small;">But
I thought I might at least get some reviews and maybe some of those
readers ( I was hoping for a 10% read rate) would tell their friends.
That was all that I was hoping . . . but there was more good news to
come. I just didn't know it right away. </span></span>
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<span style="font-family: Times New Roman, serif;"><span style="font-size: small;">On
September 29, Saturday morning at 9 AM, the day after the giveaway, I
looked at my numbers (yet again) and saw that my sales still stood at
18 units and one unit had been borrowed. Okay, I thought, that's
alright, probably later I would get some reviews and maybe a few
more borrows. Besides, I had read in someone else's blog at some earlier point that giveaways were really only good for sales if you had other books to sell. I only had the one. </span></span>
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<div style="margin-bottom: 0in;">
<span style="font-family: Times New Roman, serif;"><span style="font-size: small;">It
should be noted that the only methods of advertising I used was
Twitter and Facebook, mostly Twitter. I had 120 followers as of
September 28<sup>th</sup>. I spent the whole of
September 27<sup>th</sup> composing my nine different tweets. I
tried to use my hash marks judiciously (I had heard that hash marks were important) and tweeted all day long the
day of the giveaway. I have two video book trailers, which were
mentioned in most of my tweets. If you haven't seen the trailers yet
here's the link. <a href="http://joycenance.com/Joyces_Video_Book_Trailers.php">http://joycenance.com/Joyces_Video_Book_Trailers.php</a>
I did not use the help of bloggers, portals, reviewers or Facebook
groups to publicize the event. It was “Follow Friday on one of my
Yahoo groups and they tweeted for me. That obviously helped.</span></span></div>
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<div style="margin-bottom: 0in;">
<span style="font-family: Times New Roman, serif;"><span style="font-size: small;">Later
on Saturday, about 2:30 PM, I looked at my sales numbers and
saw that I had sold 50 units. Wow! Sunday morning, it was up to 155.
Triple Wow!!! I had never sold more than 120 in a month in the three
months the book has been out. By Sunday night sales were up to 200
units and the book was #3 on the paid Kindle True Crime. </span></span>
</div>
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<div style="margin-bottom: 0in;">
<span style="font-family: Times New Roman, serif;"><span style="font-size: small;">It's
Monday now and I don't know how all of this will turn out and not to
cuss or anything, but I am damn happy with this giveaway. </span></span>
</div>
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<span style="font-family: Times New Roman, serif;"><span style="font-size: small;">ps
If anyone has any thoughts on this subject please comment or email me at
<a href="mailto:info@joycenance.com">info@joycenance.com</a>. thanks </span></span>
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Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04164188328139258468noreply@blogger.com3tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4672901567715280935.post-7771445656576874422012-09-17T07:31:00.000-07:002012-09-17T07:31:22.899-07:00Criminal Investigation - Chronology is KingWhile I spend a good part of my day
writing crime books, I spend another part attending college as a
criminal justice major. It's true most of the people in my class
expect to be a cop of some sort when they graduate, but I am more
interested in the art of investigations. In fact, I'm taking a criminal
investigations class this semester! The stuff I have learned so far,
definitely helps me be a better crime writer.<br />
<br />
What does one learn in a criminal
investigation class? A lot. We have covered forensic stuff like how
to recognize basic fingerprint types – arch, loop and whorl. How
to take fingerprints. We have also covered what type of evidence is
most likely to contain DNA. (drinking glasses, underwear, bloody
rags) We have learned that a single strand of hair can inform one of
gender, race, age, true hair color, and general health. We have also
learned that the definition of homicide is the killing of one human
by another human and that murder is the unlawful killing of another
human without justification or excuse. We know that murders are
always homicides but homicides are not always murders.<br />
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The most important thing I have
learned, however, in terms of both writing and investigating: is that
chronology is king. That is to say, when trying to piece together an
investigation, one must do it in chronological order. Even though
this may seem self-evident, there is a big tendency (myself included)
to jump back and forth in time while stepping through the crime. My
advice is: don't do it. It's too confusing for the reader (and an
investigations process). I have found that if everything is put in
precise time order, the reader doesn't have to think so hard. They
can just enjoy the read.
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For instance, this week my class was
given the assignment to review the Jon Benet Ramsey case and list the
things that were done wrong by the Boulder Colorado Police and then
list what the police should have done. The general facts of the
case are that on the morning of December 26, 1996, a six year old
girl was found missing by her mother who simultaneously discovered a
ransom note on the stairs. The mother called 911, the police came and
about seven hours later the child was found by her father. She was
discovered in the basement of her own house - murdered. The crime
was never solved and the parents were (and still are by many)
considered the prime suspects.</div>
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<div style="margin-bottom: 0in;">
The first thing I did was make a time
line of events for the initial 24 hours. Once I did that, many
mistakes were obvious. Here is a the first few entries in my time
line. Can you see with this time line, even without professional
training, some of the things that were done wrong?</div>
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1. 2 AM neighbor hears scream.
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2. 5:45 JBR found missing by mom
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3. 5:48 mom finds
kidnapper's ransom note on stairs</div>
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4. 5:52 mom calls police - 911</div>
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<div style="margin-bottom: 0in;">
5. 5:55 JBR parents call two sets of
family friends to come over to the house</div>
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<div style="margin-bottom: 0in;">
6. 5:59 police arrive – Officer
French - 1<sup>st</sup> to arrive</div>
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<div style="margin-bottom: 0in;">
7. 6 AM Officer French makes a quick
search of the house with dad, John Ramsey, then looks for entry/exit
points. He sees no sign of struggle. Did not search “wine cellar
room” in basement because it was “locked”.</div>
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<div style="margin-bottom: 0in;">
8. 6:03 am - “friends” arrive
including Fleet White</div>
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<div style="margin-bottom: 0in;">
9. 6:20 am Fleet White searches
basement. Mr White sees lights on in the basement and “wine cellar”
door open. Mr White sees broken window in the basement and a suitcase
along with a broken shard of glass under the window. (Note: later he
did not remember if the window was open or closed.) Mr White opens
the wine cellar door but doesn't see anything because he can't find
the light switch.</div>
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<div style="margin-bottom: 0in;">
10. 6:25 Officer French seals off
JBR's bedroom only</div>
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<div style="margin-bottom: 0in;">
11. 6:45 Three more BPD arrive</div>
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<div style="margin-bottom: 0in;">
12. 7 am Burke (JBR's brother)
awakened</div>
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<div style="margin-bottom: 0in;">
Based on only the above facts, did
mistakes jump out at you? Some of the things I saw was: the first
officer on the scene (who was the Boulder Police Chief) did not
secure the entire house as a crime scene, the parents and their
friends were allowed to remain in the house and roam freely, thus
contaminating evidence. The police officer, when searching the house
initially, did not open a locked door in the basement. This is where
the body was eventually found. There is no mention of experts like
the FBI being called in immediately. (They weren't called until three
hours later). The brother, who slept on the same floor of the house
as the sister was not awakened and questioned for an hour.
</div>
<br />
<div style="margin-bottom: 0in;">
Obviously, There was a mountain of
mistakes in this case and many books have been written discussing
these mistakes. But in this case, like any other case, the easiest
way to begin to understand the crime and to find discrepancies, is to
put the events in time order. I recommend when writing about crime,
be it true crime or crime fiction, always put the sequences in
chronological order, do not jump around in time. It builds tension
naturally and makes it easier for the reader to follow and to
possibly solve the crime.
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Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04164188328139258468noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4672901567715280935.post-87607074038697123642012-09-05T16:32:00.004-07:002012-09-05T16:36:49.547-07:00Crime Doesn't Pay but the Perks aren't so BadPoor old Doug Vaughn got his prison sentence today. Twelve years. So sad, so sad. KOB gives you the details of the crime and the sentencing. <a data-mce-href="http://www.kob.com/article/stories/S2754451.shtml?cat=500" href="http://www.kob.com/article/stories/S2754451.shtml?cat=500">http://www.kob.com/article/stories/S2754451.shtml?cat=500</a>. <br />
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He did get the gig he wanted though. Federal minimum security as opposed to State medium security where all the regular criminals are . . . murderers and rapists and such. The judge was told that it would cost about $40,000 per year to keep 65 year old Vaughn locked up. If he lives all 12 years of his sentence, it will cost the taxpayers about $500,000. Guess we showed him how not to swindle us out of our money. <br />
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I worked at the Vaughn company every so briefly when I first moved to Albuquerque. I wanted to give real estate a go and after getting my license, I took a seat at the Vaughn company. The qualifying broker, when hiring me, told me that they didn't hire "just anybody" that walked in. But I'm pretty sure that they did. Why? Not because they thought any particular newbie was going to sell any real estate. That was doubtful. They wanted your desk fee. I think it was about $45 per month to have a chair at a desk with a phone - crammed in with about 60 other desks with phones. <br />
I was also given the opportunity to work "floor duty." That is where I answered Vaughn's incoming phone calls for free. As in no compensation. The idea was, it was supposed to generate leads for me. That didn't happen. I was also supposed to be mentored by the qualifying broker while at the "office" working floor duty. That didn't happen either. Any questions that I asked the qualifying broker were brushed off, with him saying he didn't have time for me.. He was too busy cherry picking all of the real leads that came in. <br />
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And every now and then, I saw Doug Vaughn. Any conversation with Doug Vaughn was one way. The message was always the same: 1. Doug Vaughn is a real estate god. 2. Try to emulate him as best you can but know that you have no chance. 3. Pay your monthly desk fees on time or Doug Vaughn will take you to collections. What a pity this wonderful man ended up in prison. Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04164188328139258468noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4672901567715280935.post-74365934467313385302012-08-27T09:15:00.000-07:002012-08-28T05:45:40.598-07:00The Crime Victim's Face<br />
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Aurora, Colorado . . . Oak Creek, Wisconsin . . . Tucson, Arizona. Blood and dead bodies everywhere. Everyone wants to see what the criminal-of-the-day looks like and to a lesser extent, know why he did it. Eventually the killer's photo is posted everywhere and citizens intently study the image for signs of obvious evil. People like to think that, if the situation were to happen to them, they would immediately recognize the insane grin or the racist glower or the orange hair and then be smart enough get the hell out of out of Dodge . . . or something. Lamentably, criminals of the future refuse to be defined. </div>
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The very saddest part is that the criminal's picture is the one we remember. Why? Because after the initial broadcast, it is then broadcast again. And again and again. And again and again. The deceased victims? The surviving victims? The heroes? The victims families? Not so much. Not at all really, after the first week or two. </div>
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And that is in the high profile crimes. When someone's child is murdered in a robbery or a drug deal gone bad or for no apparent reason at all, the public will most likely see a photo or two of the killer, if he's known, but no images whatsoever of the victim. That is wrong.</div>
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Why do these murderers' faces need to be shown over and over again? I understand once or twice but to the point of a previously unknown felon's face being burned into our brains? Created by that ubiquitous reality show - “the news”, which routinely turns criminals into celebrities. </div>
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If the victim happens to be famous already, like Gabrielle Giffords, that is another matter. Every moment of Ms. Giffords recovery was documented, which is fine. But when she was shot, there were other victims too. Some survived and some did not. If you are an everyday Joe, then it's as if you were killed in a car crash . . . sad, but not so memorable. </div>
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My book, “Escaping the Arroyo” is about a crime not as renown as the ones above, but notorious just the same - in Albuquerque, New Mexico. The mugshot of convicted kidnapper/rapist/killer, Michael Guzman, landed on the front page many times. There would have been even more pictures but his attorney informed the court that cameras made him nervous. Contrast that with murder victim Julie Jackson, who's beautiful face never made the front page at all. Recently, also in Albuquerque, another convicted murderer's image, Michael Astorga, who always seemed to be smirking at the camera, dominated the media. Victim Jim McGrane's photo was also shown, but again and even though he was a Bernalillo County Sheriff shot in the line of duty, not as often. As for pictures of Astorga's second murder victim, Candido Martinez, they were few and far between. </div>
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My point is, yes, these horrible crimes are going to be discussed ad nauseum, but why is it the criminal's face we remember? Reporting the evildoing is necessary but instead of repeatedly showing the murderer, how about showing the victims - not also, but instead . . . every time. In the case of the deceased victims, all they have left are their pictures and the memories they represent.</div>
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<a href="http://www.amazon.com/dp/B0088QJGWQ">Buy "Escaping the Arroyo" at Amazon.com</a><br />
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<a href="http://www.bestsellers-shop-online.com/2012/07/a-closer-look-at-the-12-aurora-colorado-shooting-victims-james-holmes/">Aurora Colorado Shooting Victims</a>Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04164188328139258468noreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4672901567715280935.post-26933804484383094882012-08-01T22:03:00.001-07:002012-08-02T16:59:14.103-07:00Joyce Nance Talks About her Book on Channel 13On Wednesday, August 1, 2012, my book was featured on a section of Albuquerque's Channel 13 - 10 o'clock news with Amanda Goodman. Wow! The story came on about six minutes into the show. Double wow!! I wasn't even sure I'd get on, let alone so early. I was shocked.<br />
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I went down to the station this afternoon and in a back studio with a camerman and Amanda she asked me everything she could think of to get enough footage to piece something together. I think she did a great job. I will put up a link to the clip when it becomes available.<br />
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Also today, Bookworks Bookstore on Rio Grande Blvd accepted the book into their store. That is great as well. <br />
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This book is one learning experience after another. I am grateful that Colene allowed me to write about her experience.<br />
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<a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JirSpmKpIFc">http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JirSpmKpIFc</a>Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04164188328139258468noreply@blogger.com4tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4672901567715280935.post-10209376347743205432012-07-21T13:08:00.000-07:002012-07-21T13:08:27.428-07:00What I have done this week to market "Escaping the Arroyo"What have I done? For sure not enough, but here's my list.<br />
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1. I had some flyers made for the two upcoming book signings. I have attached a copy of the flyer for one to be held in Albuquerque at Gruet Winery on 7/28/12 from 12-4 on the blog. The other one, at East Mountain Grill is getting external press.<br />
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2. Re: that. On Tuesday this week I was interviewed by <em>The Independent, </em>the local paper for the East Mountains and Estancia Valley. I was interviewed about the writing of the book and the upcoming book signing at East Mountain Grill on August 4, 2012 from 11-3. That was cool. The article comes out next week.<br />
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3. On Wednesday I brought a copy of the book and a press release for the Gruet Book Signing to the Albuquerque Journal and left it for Journal Sunday Book editor David Steinberg to peruse. I never heard back. Oh well.<br />
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4. Thursday got my GIANT poster made that I'm going to use for the book signings and book fairs. It is 4 feet by 3 feet and looks FABULOUS. Let me know what you think if you come by any of those events.<br />
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5. Was contacted by the East Mountain Telegraph who also want to do an article about the EM Grill book signing. I have not spoken to them yet.<br />
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6. Did my first blog post on a blog called Laeland which is a crime blog <a href="http://laemonie.wordpress.com/">http://laemonie.wordpress.com/</a>. I used some of the things I learned in my criminal investigations class at CNM to write the post. It will be online starting August 4, 2012. <br />
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7. Spent the week going to Albuquerque libraries and senior centers giving them copies of the flyers. <br />
If anyone would like a jpeg of one or both of the flyers to hand out to your friends and associates, let me know and I will email it to you. My softball team is going to get hit up on Monday night.<br />
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Once again I thank everyone that has helped us so far. We appreciate it and look forward to seeing as many people as can make it to the book signings.<br />
<br />Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04164188328139258468noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4672901567715280935.post-85780532853146007552012-07-15T17:27:00.002-07:002012-07-15T17:27:25.045-07:00A Lot Has Happened in a MonthIt's been a little over a month since the book was first published on Kindle. Then a couple of weeks later it came out in paperback. In hindsight it all happened really fast. But when it was happening, it all seemed so very slow. I had no way to be patient. Maybe I will be able to be more patient with the next book. <br />
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I'm getting myself on the six year plan. In six years I want to have sold a million copies. Only about 17 authors have sold a million copies of one book so naturally I'm thinking I will be one of them. Of course, at this point I'm not exactly a household name, except in my household, but I have confidence. <br />
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Everyday I try to make a least one positive step towards my goal of selling a million. Today was a rather weak day. So far I have only added a new picture to my Goodreads author profile, connected this blog to the same author profile, and connected my facebook fanpage to my Goodreads account. Plus I twittered about my paperback giveaway. Plus I posted a picture of one of my fans reading the book on Facebook. <br />
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Yep, it's all about social media. I still have many other things to do towards that end but that will be on other days. <br />
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There was a column written by Leslie Lithicum in the Albuquerque Journal about life imprisionment today. I am going to respond to the column, not because I disagree with it but I want to give her my point of view. I agree with the Parole Chief that life should mean life when a convicted murderer is sentenced. I will post my letter here after I write it just in case the Albuquerque Journal does choose to publish it.Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04164188328139258468noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4672901567715280935.post-13335242044253742752012-06-07T10:32:00.000-07:002012-06-07T10:32:41.348-07:00Crime Victims Deserve Respect TooIn our society, if an armed soldier goes off to war and receives a horrible injury because the "other side" is trying to capture, attack or kill him or her, that soldier is then hailed as a hero, and rightfully so. On the flip side, if an unarmed citizen walks down the street and is captured, attacked, or killed, that citizen is considered an unfortunate crime victim and is all too often ingnored and even shunned by society. The victim now makes others feel uncomfortable. The "incident" is discussed only in whispers for fear of upsetting the victim or it is not discussed at all in the belief that if you don't talk about the bad thing, the bad thing won't happen to you.<br />
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The crime victim gets no medals, no disability pension and no parades but does get the life long burden of shame. Shame in the sense that they survived and shame in the sense that somehow they brought the violence upon themselves.<br />
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The situation typically goes from something bad happened to me, to I am bad because something bad happened to me. <br />
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PTSD is an expected and understandable disabilty for war veterans. For crime victims, PTSD is oten considered a weakness. They are told to "get over it".<br />
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Soldiers, for the most part, volunteer and are trained and armed. They are to be commended for the service they provide to their country. Civilians, for the most part, are unarmed, untrained and never agreed to fighting an attacker to the death. <br />
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But sometimes they must.Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04164188328139258468noreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4672901567715280935.post-63773941872700986252012-06-05T06:18:00.000-07:002012-06-05T06:18:02.298-07:00The Book is Finally Up on KindleWow. It has taken two years and thousands (and thousands) of hours to complete but the book is up on Amazon. It is also up on Smashwords, Barnes & Noble, Kobo, Sony Reader, Apple iBookstore and the Diesel ebook store. <br />
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Now I've got to run it a flagpole and see if I can get anyone to salute it. Hopefully people will want to read this story and the story of Colene's survival - against ALL odds - and the stuggles that she encounters every day, relating back to that fateful night in 1981.Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04164188328139258468noreply@blogger.com2tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4672901567715280935.post-76446646688358472322012-06-01T19:52:00.001-07:002012-06-01T19:53:25.668-07:00Apparently Formatting is NOT InstantaneousI finially finished everything, everything on the book . . . EXCEPT the formatting . . . and I thought it would take one day to format but apparently formatters take the weekend off. I did not know that. I'm in the 24/7 world and I thought everybody else was too. <br />
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So just like every other day . . . I wait. Bums me out. <br />
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On the bright side, I finished enrolling myself for my 2 necessary ISBN numbers. That took awhile. Everything does. People look at me and think I'm goofing off on the computer all the time. Like I'm playing solitaire or something. No, I am not. It's work, work work. And what do I have to show for it? <br />
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Well, at least I am closer to fine. Just regular fine, not Joe Fine.<br />
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We will see what tomorrow brings.Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04164188328139258468noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4672901567715280935.post-6521575543513193322012-05-31T18:12:00.000-07:002012-05-31T18:37:12.190-07:0030 Years Ago TodayThirty years ago today, Michael Guzman was given the death penalty as his punishment for the savage, cold blooded murder of Julie Ann Jackson. The sentence was undone 4 years later. But the jurys' courage that day is to be commended and should be remembered. That jury understood the outside pressures but did the right things anyway. <br />
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Today I obtained a photo of that day, of that moment, from the Albuquerque Journal. That photo is the final piece I was waiting for to complete my book. Tomorrow the book goes to the formatter and then hopefully the day after that it goes on line. Then a week or two after that it will be a real three dimentional book. Like Carly Simon said, "the anticipation is keeping me waiting."Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04164188328139258468noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4672901567715280935.post-52664428047861673632012-05-28T09:33:00.002-07:002012-05-28T09:33:49.080-07:00A Book Trailer is the Way to GoLooks like I'd better consider producing a video book trailer. That's what everybody does now, when they have a book to sell. I might have an advantage that perhaps other writers do not have, in that I have previously produced videos. But I have never made a book trailer before, so we shall see. My specialty which is being funny, doesn't really lend itself to a crime book and thus my dilemma. I am willing to take suggestions. Please send them in. Thank you, I'll be waiting by my computer.Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04164188328139258468noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4672901567715280935.post-66827853511304293022012-05-27T20:08:00.000-07:002012-05-27T20:08:03.614-07:00Kindle Board Says Avoid IndiesToday, as I am madly trying to learn anything and everything that I can about Kindle, I came across a discussion board that was trying to get Indies banned from Kindle. They're serious. They don't want Indie's to be listed down at the bottom where it says "customers who viewed this also viewed". <br />
They don't want to be tricked into accidently reading someone that is not mainstream. They also want the reviewed process to be severely restricted so that they don't have to read a bunch of glowing reveiws from the author's family.<br />
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It's kind of disheartening.Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04164188328139258468noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4672901567715280935.post-77288044833696412842012-05-26T14:52:00.003-07:002012-05-26T14:52:59.163-07:00Facebook Page is UpWell, it took me muy (spanish for abuncha) time but now I've kinda, sorta got my ETA (Escaping the Arroyo) facebook page up. I had to change to timeline to do it. Man, I hate change. It took the longest time to get me to use a microwave. <br />
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They found the picture that I want to use at the Albuquerque Journal and now I just have to wait for permission from the editor to be allowed to publish it in my book. In fact, that's kind of what is holding the book up. Waiting for the picture. Til Tuesday. Then when I get it (if I get it) I've still got to send it to the Kindle formating guy. I know, I know, I could do it myself and I'm sure that one day I will, but I'm learning too much stuff right now and my brain is running out of room. Anyways, as soon as I get it formatted then I'm going to upload it on to Kindle and then, and then, Well, and then, I don't know. But I'm excited to find out. <br />
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I'm relatively sure that (still) no one is reading my blog but I will continue to publish it daily (if I can remember) as it makes me feel like I'm doing something positive.Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04164188328139258468noreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4672901567715280935.post-27433270956120814432012-05-24T19:41:00.004-07:002012-05-24T19:41:45.614-07:00Today I went to Guru M L Briggs. She had a lot of helpful ideas as usual. Main thing is just to get it done. Oh Lord, I'm trying. Need to get my author's pic and bio. Seems boring to me but maybe someone will be interested. I asked for my first review today and he told me he couldn't do it, he was too busy. Still it felt good to ask. I'll be asking a whole heck of a lot more people next week . . . when it's up on Kindle . . . I hope, I hope.<br />
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Also went to hearing today re: guzman. he is still trying to do the habeas corpus deal. he's still bumming everyone out. i hope one day that ends. it is too painful for the victims.Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04164188328139258468noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4672901567715280935.post-21507587846512170462012-05-23T15:22:00.004-07:002012-05-23T15:22:35.565-07:00Overwhelming is what it isToday, I had the best of intentions. I went to my criminal investigations class and then zipped home to finish up the stuff I need to finish up to finish up my book. (is that too many finishes?) Anyways the very first thing I see when I look at my email is that convicted killer Michael Guzman is making inroads in his habeus corpus quest to obtain another trial. That bummed me out. <br />
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Then I called the Albuquerque Journal about using one of their photos for my book and they told me I had to have the exact date of the paper and name of photographer. Ok. So I zip down to the library, found the info on the picture and called the librarian back with the details and now she's checking. I wait. <br />
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Then I'm still waiting for an answer from the isbn people on how to use their product , but so far no response. <br />
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Finally, I'm getting around to doing more research on what I need to do, which is: A. getting the book published on Kindle, and B. Finding a way to get people to read it.<br />
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We'll see how far I get.Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04164188328139258468noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4672901567715280935.post-59395019815298077892012-05-22T07:50:00.001-07:002012-05-22T07:50:32.540-07:00my first blogHello . . . I know no one is reading this, but I have to start somewhere. I'm hoping to get my first book on Kindle this week, which would be amazing. There are so many other things I need to do and at least 80% of them I don't what they are yet. Oh, well. <br />
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Anyways, for all of you that aren't reading, my first book, Escaping the Arroyo, is right around the corner. It's exciting that it is almost ready for prime time. I had no idea it would take this long or be this much work. That's just as well though, because then I would never have done it.Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04164188328139258468noreply@blogger.com0